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Life on Mars...perhaps

Life on Mars...perhaps

Photography Photography \ Nature | 07/05/06 @454 | coladelight | Comments critiques (19) | Views views (686)


Life on Mars...perhaps
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Ian and I went to the park last Sunday and found this butterfly. It was more hopping than fluttering/flying and won't alight in any of the greenery around it. It took me quite a while to get a decent shot of it. There were two of them and I think they were trying to mate but crazy me had to disturb their romance
I used PhotoFiltre to cover some distracting shadows.
Something simple and I hope you like it :)
Thanks for viewing, commenting and voting.

Maridol

My teaching hours will be increasing this month so I will try to catch up with the commenting as best as I can :)

Camera: Aosta DA5091
Software: PhotoFiltre
 
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Avatar Diane

 07/05/06 @502

WOW! Simple and very effective! I would crop a lot frop the right if I were you thouhg, it would look better IMO ;)
+9/10
 
Aboorvaa

 07/05/06 @550

very nice, i agree with diane.
 
Avatar MrBlue

 07/05/06 @564

Elegant motif in slim presentation.
Cropping right is not an option since it would destroy the shadow.
And cropping left would make the image look somewhat imbalanced.
So, I stick to the way you cropped it.

Last tiny bit I'd uprade: 1px brownish border before the black borders start to
frame the image.
 
Avatar Madanapale

 07/05/06 @685

Agree with Dominik....I wouldn't crop the right ....it will destroy the shadow.
The colors are really beautiful!!....excellent capture!!
Well done Maridol!!
Carlos
 
Avatar FAV

 07/05/06 @724

nice shot !!I
would't crop the right side indeed, NO WAY
But I don't know..... leaving it just like this you lose a lot from the detail.
Florin
 
Avatar moserArtist

 07/05/06 @730

Beautiful details and color in that butterfly!

Agree on not cropping off the right as the shadow would get lost.

Kind of think that all but the butterfly needs to be slightly darker.
The surface on which the butterfly stands looks rather bright from strong sun probably and that disturbs a little. If you can darken that part it would be better IMHO.

Keep up the good work!

...and say hi to Ian! ;)
 
Avatar coladelight

 07/05/06 @740

Thanks everyone :)
I also had the problem of choosing between a detailed subject or a full view of the shadow >_<
I decided not to crop the shadow due to the same reason you mentioned...and Ian says hello back to you too Patrick ;)
Night night to everyone for now...already 1:45am here in Japan...see you all asap :)
Maridol
 
Avatar beatrizmatar

 07/05/06 @749

Beautiful work sweetieˇˇˇˇ :)
 
Avatar Traff

 07/05/06 @778

Cropping debates... don't you just love 'em?
But this is a tricky one - the butterfly/shadow combination is what makes the image, you can't afford to lose that but it does force the butterfly uninterestingly just off-centre. You could try extending the image to the left to put the butterfly in the classic 1/3 position on the right - it would probably be too small to view comfortably here but in real life the printed image might work well - just another carrot to throw into the stew.

8) Phill

edit: nah changed my mind - you can look at the details too long and forget to view the image - i like it just like it is. It's unusual and causes debate and that's one sign of a good piece of art - no-one can agree!
My only crit then would be the butterfly's body gets camouflaged with the gravel but it's the wings that draw the attention anyway so - just looking at the details again!
 
Avatar SubtleDelight

 07/05/06 @839

Really nice Maridol!! Good clean shot with nothing to distract from the beautiful butterfly and it's shadow :).
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 07/06/06 @056

Beautiful shot Maridol!
nice textures, beautiful composition, beautiful colors
+10
 
Avatar Diegoth

 07/10/06 @415

i love the contrast from the brown to the green! awesome!
also great shot!
 
Avatar cupcake

 07/13/06 @655

Very Good ,
I Love butterfly's
Top Marks
 
Avatar hady

 08/28/06 @392

fantastic artwork its really great shot
 
Avatar Dutch-Memory

 09/01/06 @902

So simple, but also so nice:)
Good job.
 
Avatar oldskool87

 10/03/06 @872

nice work :)
 
Avatar padrino

 12/14/06 @560

nice shot ! really beautiful! +8

erdi
 
Avatar deManuel

 05/04/07 @335

Good work. :) +8
 
Avatar soheil

 05/18/07 @965

beautiful shot... +10+ :)
 
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